Similes and Metaphors — Answer Key
Part A: Fix the Sentence
Each sentence has an error. Rewrite it correctly on the line.
1. Fix the sentence:
He was as cunning like as a fox during the chess match.
Corrected: He was as cunning as a fox during the chess match.
Grade 4 similes use one comparison structure; mixing 'like' and 'as' creates a grammar error.
2. Fix the sentence:
The library was quiet as a mouse during reading time.
Corrected: The library was as quiet as a mouse during reading time.
Grade 4 similes following the 'as ___ as' pattern require both connectors to be complete.
3. Fix the sentence:
Her hair shone like as gold in the sunlight.
Corrected: Her hair shone like gold in the sunlight.
Grade 4 writers know that 'like' alone signals a simile and does not pair with 'as'.
Part B: Fill in the Blank
Write the missing word or number on each line.
1. The detective was as cunning as a fox.
Grade 4 similes use a fox to represent cleverness and quick thinking.
2. The whisper was as quiet as a mouse.
Grade 4 figurative language pairs a mouse with extreme quietness in similes.
3. After the long hike, my legs felt as heavy as lead.
Grade 4 similes compare tired heaviness to lead, a metal famous for weight.
4. The freshly washed sheets smelled as sweet as honey.
Grade 4 similes use honey to capture rich, sweet aromas in everyday writing.
Part C: Short Answer
Answer each question in one or two complete sentences.
1. Finish this simile and explain it: 'My grandfather is as wise as ___.' Then tell why.
Sample answer: My grandfather is as wise as an owl because he gives careful advice and knows many old stories.
Grade 4 writers complete similes and justify the comparison by sharing a shared trait.
2. Create a simile that fits this sentence: 'The dancer moved as gracefully as ___.' Explain your choice.
Sample answer: The dancer moved as gracefully as a swan gliding across a still lake because both move smoothly.
Grade 4 writers strengthen similes by linking the comparison to a shared quality like smooth motion.