Argumentative Writing — Answer Key
Part A: Fix the Sentence
Each sentence has an error. Rewrite it correctly on the line.
1. Fix the sentence:
Students should wear uniforms because I said so.
Corrected: Students should wear uniforms because research shows they reduce bullying and help students focus on learning.
The corrected sentence is: "Students should wear uniforms because research shows they reduce bullying and help students focus on learning.". The original sentence "Students should wear uniforms because I said so." contained an error that needed to be fixed.
2. Fix the sentence:
Recycling is good. Also, it helps the planet. Also, it saves money.
Corrected: Recycling is beneficial because it helps the planet. Furthermore, it saves communities money on waste disposal.
The corrected sentence is: "Recycling is beneficial because it helps the planet. Furthermore, it saves communities money on waste disposal.". The original sentence "Recycling is good. Also, it helps the planet. Also, it saves money." contained an error that needed to be fixed.
3. Fix the sentence:
Everyone wants longer lunch breaks so we should get them.
Corrected: Schools should provide longer lunch breaks because students who rest longer eat healthier and perform better in afternoon classes.
The corrected sentence is: "Schools should provide longer lunch breaks because students who rest longer eat healthier and perform better in afternoon classes.". The original sentence "Everyone wants longer lunch breaks so we should get them." contained an error that needed to be fixed.
Part B: Fill in the Blank
Write the missing word or number on each line.
1. Words like "furthermore," "in addition," and "moreover" are examples of linking words.
Linking (transition) words connect ideas and show how they relate to each other.
2. A reason explains why you believe your claim is true.
A reason answers 'why' — it explains the logic behind the claim.
3. Using facts and statistics as evidence makes an argument more convincing than using feelings alone.
Evidence (facts, statistics, examples) provides objective support for the claim.
4. The linking word "however" is used to show a contrasting idea in an argument.
'However' signals a contrast or counterpoint to the previous idea.
Part C: Short Answer
Answer each question in one or two complete sentences.
1. Give two reasons that could support this claim: 'Schools should have a garden.'
Sample answer: First, a school garden teaches students about science and healthy eating. Second, working in a garden gives students outdoor exercise and reduces stress.
Strong reasons answer 'why' the claim is true and can be backed with evidence.
2. Why is a fact or statistic stronger evidence than a personal story when writing an argument?
Sample answer: A fact or statistic is stronger because it applies to many people and can be verified, while a personal story only shows one person's experience and may not be true for everyone.
Facts and statistics are more objective and generalizable than anecdotal evidence.